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What you receive:
A thorough inline content-editing critique to sharpen ideas, strengthen structure, and refine language for a more cohesive, compelling story.
Three to six pages of feedback that celebrate strengths, pinpoint opportunities to heighten clarity, tension, and emotional resonance, and a list of curated resources to support your growth on future projects.
Your story matters.
That’s why I approach every project with meticulous attention and a thoughtful eye for nuance—drawing on more than three decades of experience with the English language and its quirks. As story editor for After Dinner Conversation magazine, I’ve guided hundreds of authors to refine prose into powerful narratives that both entertain and resonate.
My role is to serve your voice. I listen closely, respect your style, and work with you to bring out the strongest version of your story.
When you work with me, you’ll get more than surface edits. You’ll get a creative ally who listens, pinpoints what’s working, and shows you how to elevate pacing, syntax, and flow without losing your unique style. My feedback combines detailed inline notes with a big‑picture summary—highlighting strengths, identifying growth areas, and offering practical craft tools and resources you can carry into your next story.
The goal is simple: to empower you with clarity, confidence, and craft—so your story travels true, from your imagination to your readers’ hearts.
Here’s what others say about my work:
“…would highly recommend her to anyone looking for a top copy editor with a keen eye.”
“…an excellent editor who draws on her own writing gift and skill when partnering with a client.”
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If you’d like to keep building your craft, join me at Revisions & Revelations, my weekly Substack devoted to the art of prose—where we explore how to elevate language, sharpen structure, and draw readers deeper into the story. You can also find more of my work on LinkedIn.
*** After checkout you will receive an email from R.K.H. Ndong within 24hrs requesting a copy of your story.
*** If, for some strange reason, our Story Editor is not available, you will be given the option of a refund, wait until her scheduled frees up, or to have your story critiqued by another senior reader on our staff of your choosing.